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Thursday, 16 June 2016

Brodi Persuasive writing

Why you should brush your teeth?
I wish I had your teeth? Do you with sometimes you had the perfect smile? Well I do that’s why I think you should brush your teeth because if you don’t you will get really really bad breath,you will have very sore teeth and your teeth will get rotten.

Firstly,why you should brush your teeth is because you will get really bad breath. If you have bad breath no one would be around you because you have so bad breath. You don’t want people smelling your horrible breath brush your teeth so you don’t have a bad breath.

Second of all you should brush your teeth because you will have very sore teeth. You won’t be able to eat because your teeth are so sore. If someone bumps your teeth you will be mad at them but it’s your fault. If you're at school and it hurts and it is not good.

Last of all you should brush your teeth because your teeth will get rotten. Do you really want people going “EWW your teeth are so gross” just because you don’t brush your teeth. When people take photos of you, you don’t look very good. Brush your teeth or if you don’t all this will happen to you.

In conclusion
If you don’t brush your teeth all of this I said will happen to you. Brush your teeth or you get bad breath,you get sore teeth and your teeth will get rotten. Make sure to brush your teeth every night and morning. BRUSH YOUR TEETH.

From Brodi

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