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Thursday, 16 June 2016

Josh - You Should Brush Your Teeth

Persuasive Speech - You Should Brush Your Teeth


Do you like that pearly smile in all these great photos? Well if you want it, brush your teeth. If you brush your teeth you will have nice breath, if you don’t brush your teeth when you’re young you’ll have to go to the dentist and it will be expensive and if you brush your teeth they won’t fall out and you won’t have cavities.

Firstly, you should brush your teeth because you won’t have bad breath. If you have bad breath some people might not want to play with you! Bad breath can also cause people always telling you to brush your teeth also known as judging and you don’t want anyone to judge you.

Another reason you should brush your teeth is, you will have to have fillings. Cavities and decay can cause your teeth to fall out and if your teeth are rotten and black like a plum the tooth fairy wouldn’t be pleased. If you get fillings it really hurts even though I haven’t experienced it, it will really hurt. Also if your teeth are rotten and they don’t fall out you’ll have to go to the dentist and get them pulled out

Finally, if you brush your teeth and take care of them when you’re younger you won’t have to pay lots at the dentist when you’re older. Money is very valuable so, if you don’t brush your teeth when you’re younger save some money to pay lots of money at the dentist. You’ll have to pay lots of money for the dentist appointment because it’s more hard work for an adult appointment than a kid's appointment.

In conclusion, brushing your teeth is a good thing to do and it will show some respect to some people that don’t like bad breath and bad looking teeth. So brush your teeth or you’ll parents will say to you. “GO BRUSH YOUR TEETH!!!”


Joshua

2 comments:

  1. Nice vocabulary Josh!!! Like Mrs. Slee said, you are now improving your vocabulary but there is a mistake. In your second reason at the end, there is no full stop! If you want to, you can edit your work.

    - Delilah :)

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  2. Nice vocabulary Josh!!! Like Mrs. Slee said, you are now improving your vocabulary but there is a mistake. In your second reason at the end, there is no full stop! If you want to, you can edit your work.

    - Delilah :)

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