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Thursday, 16 June 2016

Kaizen O Persuasive writing sample

 Do you like having a fresh smile? Well You Should Your Teeth! I require you to brush your teeth so you won’t get bad breath, so your teeth don't rot and it's a lot of money when you are older to get your teeth fix.

My first reason why you should brush your teeth is so you don’t get “BAD BREATH”! After you gorge a lot of breakfast your breath can get a bit smelly, and you don't want that now do you. So after breakfast before you go to school brush your teeth and you won't have bad breath many more.

Another reason you should brush your teeth is so your teeth won't rot. If you  brush your teeth you can abolish these rotten teeth and get nice teeth once again. Having bad breath is bad, but having rotten teeth is really bad so you should brush your teeth.

My last reason why you should brush your teeth is so you don't have to go and get them fixed. Do you want to spend a lot of money on getting your teeth fixed? Well you should brush your teeth so you don't have to get them whitten because they are rotting.

If you brush your teeth you can have a lovely gigantic smile. So I hope you brush your teeth everyday It's good to have nice teeth.

Kaizen

1 comment:

  1. You used some awesome vocabulary in here Kaizen! Keep it up :)

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