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Thursday, 16 June 2016

Leon Persuasive Piece

“Don’t you love pearly white teeth instead of black pearly teeth? Well I don’t” but do you ever think why your guardian wants you to brush your teeth. Well your in luck I have some reasons why. The reasons are if you are an adult going to the dentist it’s very expensive and painful, you can also have bad breath, and you could have very sore teeth.


My first reason is if you don’t brush your teeth and if you are an adult you’ll have to pay a lot of money just to go to the dentist. It’ll be very painful sometimes. If I were you I would brush your teeth and I would abolish bad teeth if i could do anything.


Secondly is if you don’t brush your teeth you will have bad breath and your friend would go bye bye. You could abolish your bad breath but you will require a mint and brushing.


Lastly, you have to brush your teeth because your teeth would get very sore. Your teeth would get sore because there’s germs and bacteria eating your tooth. They live inside your tooth you don’t want that to happen do you? Even myself I could cry like a baby. Your parents would have a hard time calming you down.


In conclusion, you have to brush your teeth because these things could happen to you, you have to pay a lot of money to go to the dentist, you will have bad breath, and your teeth will be sore. I hope the reign of bad teeth ends so come on everyone brush your teeth!!


-Leon

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