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Thursday, 16 June 2016

BRUSH YOUR TEETH PEOPLE!!!! - Delightful Delilah! :-)

Persuasive writing - You Should Brush Your Teeth!!!


Don’t you love having a fresh nice smile? THEN BRUSH YOUR TEETH!!! You should brush your teeth. If you don’t brush your teeth, you will have BAD  Breath, your teeth will get rotten and it is expensive when you get older.


My first reason is, bad breath. You should brush your teeth so you don’t get bad breath. I’m sure everyone of you have smelt bad breath before,  I promise you that  if you haven’t it smells REALLY BAD! If people carry on living like that, they will have a stinky life.


secondly, your teeth will get rotten! The number of people who have rotten their teeth is SO HIGH!! When you wake up in the morning you want to look at nice white teeth not black teeth rotten yucky teeth. I would probably have nightmares if I saw  that. So brush your teeth!


My Third Reason Is, getting your teeth fixed is so expensive! Even the people in the dentist Clinic  could make more money than Katy Perry! There is too many people going to the dentist. Also if you don’t brush your teeth, you will have to spend CRAZY MONEY  just  to get them fixed or repaired.


In conclusion, you should brush your teeth because if you don’t you will have bad breath, your teeth will rot and getting your teeth is so expensive!!!  SO BRUSH - YOUR - TEETH!!!!

Thank you for reading my awesome story!!!
- Delilah :-)


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