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Thursday, 16 June 2016

William - Why you should Brush your Teeth

You Should Brush Your Teeth

Owwwww my teeth hurt. Don’t you hate it when your teeth hurt well then you should brush your teeth. I think you should brush your teeth because if you don’t you will have bad breath, sore teeth and cavities, and it’s expensive.

Firstly, you should brush your teeth because if you don’t you will have bad breath and no one likes stinky breath. Do you want people to think your stinky? Probably not. If you have bad breath people will avoid you and won’t want to be your friend.

Another reason why, you should brush your teeth is it’s expensive to fix. If you don’t you will have to go to the dentist and if you are an adult it costs lots of money. Think if you don’t brush your teeth when you’re a child then you will get older and it will be very expensive replacing all of your teeth.

My last reason why, you should brush your teeth because if you don’t brush your teeth you will get cavities and then they will rot. After they rot they might turn black and die. It’s sore having dark black teeth and you will look weird. If you have black dead teeth then the dentist will come and abolish your feeble weak teeth.

In conclusion, I think you should brush your teeth because if you don’t you will have bad breath, your teeth will rot and then die and it’s expensive to fix your teeth so, if you like your teeth brush them.

By William

4 comments:

  1. COOL piece of work William!!

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  2. Nice job William! Just remember that sow is spelt like sore. But good job!

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  3. Nice job William! Just remember that sow is spelt like sore. But good job!

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  4. Nice job William! Just remember that sow is spelt like sore. But good job!

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